Since ancient time, sport activities are considered significant thus, it has invariably been encouraged and supported. But is it really advantageous for the students and the society at large? Although, a slew of people unfailingly concur with this notion including myself. Nonetheless, I would still like to present few evidences and justifications to validate my perspective.
To embark upon, the most impeccable reason to reinforce this bird's-eye view is that it plays an indispensable role in achieving great health. Nowadays, life of children is extremely busy and nerve-wracking which does not allow them to devote any time to exercise. This not only makes their schedule monotonous but indeed makes them prone to obesity. By promoting games period in school curriculum, we are actually helping our children to grow and to become robust. For instance, my son plays Basketball in his school team which has assisted him a lot in getting taller and building stamina. Thus, it's contribution in providing better health is absolutely inevitable.
Moreover, participation in games also makes younger generation more social in temperament. It is no exaggeration to claim that teenagers now are quite lonely in contrast to older time. It is because generally now both the parents are working and children are left alone either to play Video game or to watch Television. This is a deplorable situation since it isolates a child and deprives him from having interaction with many people. Therefore, mostly they are unable to learn communication skills which are in fact crucial to thrive. I myself work for a multi national company and knows the vitality of this virtue that it is imperative in modern world to succeed.
Conspicuously, I would like to mention assertively that the benefits of sports training far outweigh any negative repercussions. Because they not only help in developing children's overall personality but also improvise their health and power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the students and the society at large? Although, a slew of people unfailingly concur wi...
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... many people. Therefore, mostly they are unable to learn communication skills wh...
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...refore, mostly they are unable to learn communication skills which are in fact c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32475884244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03120456495 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655948553055 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5799404911 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590915268862 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161768127319 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231101591232 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346925631982 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135764623967 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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