Dear Susan,
I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing to tell you about my holiday plan, hoping that you will be able to accompany me in it.
As you know, I was extremely busy in preparing for the exams that finished last week. This diligence was not only exhausting for me but indeed, it was quite boredom too. Hence, I decided to take a break to rejuvenate myself. Also, it has been long since we last met and it would be a great way to spend quality time with each other.
As per my plan it is wise to go to Nainitaal, as it has pleasant climate with beautiful lakes where we can do boating as well, since, you love boating a lot. According to the plan, it would be appropriate to keep three days for this trip starting from coming Friday as it is weekend also, it would not be a problem for both of us. Rest of the details about the journey have been attached to this email.
Waiting for your positive and prompt reply to finalize the plan.
See you soon,
Rachel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24736842105 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15664276904 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5675933076 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209789060934 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839238975717 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889973137232 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113687817499 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101087380657 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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