All over the world there are a slew of cultures and languages. But is it possible to identify an individual's attitude and culture just by examining his costume? Although, many people might discord with this claim however, I absolutely concur with this prospective and will provide evidences and justifications in this essay to validate my bird's-eye view.
To embark upon, every region has sundry weather conditions and according to that only citizens of that place choose their attire. Hence, it is no exaggeration to state that it is indeed quite feasible to guess a person's culture because he is bound to dress up considering the climatic situation but not merely by his desire to carry something. For instance, Canada is extremely cold most of the year and so the population there is compelled to wear warm dark coloured clothes as compared to India where it is mostly scorching hot. thus, Indians ideally select light coloured cotton over synthetic fabric.
Furthermore, every person has its own personality and he likes to buy dresses keeping various factors in mind such as his age, comfort, habits and most importantly his occupation. Allow me to elaborate this statement for better comprehension by giving an example of myself. I am a Doctor by profession and addressing that I am expected to wear polished, decorous, formal yet simple outfit. Additionally, the apron that I wear on top not only symbolises my job but indeed, explains my character invariably. It is because the Doctors are inevitably polite, helpful, intelligent and sophisticated.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention assertively that as all states and nations have their specific food and festivals. Likewise, every human being is unique in his own manner, his clothes being the crucial part of his persona undoubtedly reflect his temperament and culture impeccably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
All over the world there are a slew of cultures and languages. But is it po...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ages. But is it possible to identify an individuals attitude and culture just by examining ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...India where it is mostly scorching hot. thus, Indians ideally select light coloured ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93652099525 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5032366659 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753758418062 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241272297942 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222283864029 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435666024857 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124055093287 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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