You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you

Dear James,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am very happy to tell you that I have moved to Noida two weeks back and would like to invite you to spend some time with me in my new house.

As you knew, I was expecting a promotion since one year so three weeks ago my Boss honoured me by making me the Senior Manager of the Sales department of their new branch in Noida. Therefore, I had to resettle here but I was glad to do it since Delhi is overcrowded and extremely polluted to live in.

Furthermore, my new house is located in the best society "South Avenue" which is very safe and has a private gym with all the latest equipments and swimming pool. Also, my company has given me a brand new three bedroom flat with attached bathrooms and a modular kitchen. It also has a huge balcony which we have transformed into a garden by putting artificial grass and beautiful plants. In addition, I have recently bought a Play station which is indeed waiting for you. It has been so long since we last met and it would be great to spend some quality time with you here. So, kindly spare some time from your busy schedule to visit my new house.

Eagerly waiting to meet you.

See you soon,
John

Votes
Average: 8.8 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36681222707 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34121415688 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6988335475 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259403249283 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990559937359 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580647676423 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153654797286 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541343333626 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.