In modern era, the vitality of education is inevitable and thus students now take admission in various courses in a college or a university. But are these courses provide a key to attain a great job or a successful future? Well, many people think that nowadays, experience holds more importance in contrast to some degree and thus it is more appropriate to begin working after school. However, I strongly disapprove this notion and will provide reasons to justify my view point.
To embark upon, a degree is mandatory to become authorized to work in certain fields officially. In various professions it is extremely essential to have the degree to practice it otherwise, it is considered as an offense and government can take legal action against you. For example, to work as a doctor you must possess the M.B.B.S degree and for which one must go to the medical college and devote five years studying this course thoroughly.
Additionally, in any sector whether it is a private or a government set up, salary is decided on the basis of a degree that an individual is holding. Although, experience does count and can add up to your salary to some extent but it is not the only criteria. I can reminisce, one of my friends Rahul had a very good exposure to computers as he had worked under the tutelage of a famous software engineer for six years. But he was neither offered the same package nor the similar post in any office. Hence, the significance of university courses can not be denied.
To recapitulate, I would like to state assertively that the benefits of finishing university education far outweigh any negative repercussions because a person can gain experience any time after completing his education but once he leaves studying then it is almost impossible to continue it later since there is a suitable age for doing anything and it is not at all feasible to study late in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... as a doctor you must possess the M.B.B.S degree and for which one must go to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79573170732 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82085685876 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2691498543 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179299627175 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541240245924 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492318560268 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095683228149 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332853159848 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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