It is argued that having a decent mix of multi-cultural population in a country is key to it's advancement and makes for a happening place to live. This essay agrees that a nation is on the path of prosperity and has better quality of life when it's people come from a variety of ethnic backgrounds. Firstly, this essay will discuss how business and trade improve in the country and, secondly, illustrate how citizens get to enjoy all kinds of foods and festivities from distant parts of the world.
Multi-culturalism in a country is pivotal to it's commerce and international relations. Settlers from other countries generally have strong familial and cultural links to their mother nation that inevitably leads to better trade opportunities with their erstwhile home country apart from having positive outcome on friendship and strategic partnership between the nations involved. For example, owing to a large diaspora of people of Indian descent in Canada, both countries today enjoy flourishing trade and amiable state relations that is fundamental to Canada's economy generating great deal of revenue.
A country which has lots of people from different Nationalities is a highly preferred place to live. A nation with a thriving population of immigrants from around the world becomes a crucible for exchange of a slew of cultural ideas, generating tremendous amount of new activities at the people's disposal. For instance, in Canada, due to a huge population with Japanese background, it's fairly common to find several good restaurants offering authentic Oriental cuisine, which, in turn, enjoys great number of patrons among Canadians nowadays that are drawn towards exploring exciting flavours such joints have to offer.
In conclusion, a country with its citizens coming from vastly different cultures and Nationalities is a progressive state as is evident from it's enhanced trade and relationships. Such a country is also a great place to spend your life in, owing to the
the rich array of cultural experiences it has in it's bounty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...mendous amount of new activities at the peoples disposal. For instance, in Canada, due ...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...t place to spend your life in, owing to the the rich array of cultural experiences it h...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...t place to spend your life in, owing to the the rich array of cultural experiences it h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27217125382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98144279048 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0420880142 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.727272727 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112165847797 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526219546442 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247060557567 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694277560412 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184084647497 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.