You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Anna,
Good day! How are you? Hope that you are okay and healthy. I wrote this letter because we recently gone to live in a new place.
My family needs to move to new address, it is because our place got demolished and since we do have our own house far from the city where we live before they decided that we need to go back to our place. In that reason, we do not have to pay for the house rental but disadvantage is we will no longer see each other every week, because you are there in Manila and me here in Zamboanga. Since we are now far from each other I wanted to invite you to visit me here if you have your own free time, it is because our new place is well known for its beautiful beaches and resorts that we do both wanted. Also I already chose a resort that has many adventures that we can try on. In addition to it this place is safe and clean, so we can enjoy our time to the fullest.
Always take care and hope to see you soon!
Sincerely yours,
Maria Judith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anna, Good day! How are you? Hope that you are...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hes and resorts that we do both wanted. Also I already chose a resort that has many ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05076142132 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9400826632 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3276565596 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265824908725 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118201154232 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812025346094 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220387245135 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964801411462 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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