Dear Shankly,
I am just writing this letter to let you know that I have recently moved to Florence, Italy, and I am loving it here.
This is due to the reason that I have joined the Florentine University of Arts to study in the Bachelor of Medieval Arts programme which is a two-year course.
I have found a small apartment for me to stay, which itself is built on top of a four-hundred-year old building. The whole place and the surroundings just seem like a medieval dream come true.
My friend, I am literally so excited to roam around this magnificent old city with you. Its a sure thing to say that you will be smitten by its picturesque churches and palaces.
Eagerly waiting to hear from you.
With love,
Gestalt.
Votes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ecently moved to Florence, Italy, and I am loving it here. This is due to the reason tha...
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Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...und this magnificent old city with you. Its a sure thing to say that you will be sm...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 602.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56060606061 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71394047667 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674242424242 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7549997143 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186021082169 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714640302855 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512005838237 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992714727138 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499074780881 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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