You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:» explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write

Dear Manager,

I am a bank manager and I am writing to formally complaint about the food quality of your retaurant. I came to know about this place through my colleague who had visited here once. So, I came to your restaurant two days back for dinner and I was very discomfited.

I came with my whole family as it was a special occasion of my wife's 50th birthday. We had ordered chicken and fish dishes and I have to say somberly that all of them were insipid and savourless, the fish was practically rotten indeed. Although, we tried a lot to eat as they were quite expensive but in the end we were unable to finish them.

To conclude, I want you to change your cook because it was not just us who did not like the food. Infact, most of the visitors loathed it and were complaining. Hence, for the successful future of your restaurant it is necessary to hire a new talented chef who can not only satiate the hunger of the customers but also compell them to praise the food, so, they come here again and again.

Awaiting for your promp action,

Yours sincerely,
John

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... so, they come here again and again. Awaiting for your promp action, Yours sincerely, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4472361809 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44172503798 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.840255016 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147777895799 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549051324689 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276049341944 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712498632597 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227937999137 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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