The text mentions that allowing the employees to work for four days a week would be more beneficial for both the company and employees as there are several advantages of working four days a week. However, the lecturer rebuts the passage for the following reasons.
Firstly, the speaker states that the company will have to bear the extra cost of hiring new employees. He tells that although passage mentions that the employees will work only for eighty percent of their salary but more money will be spend on the training of the new employees, in buying new computers and more office space will be required. Moreover the cost of the health benefits will remain same for all employees. So it is not in favour of company as described in the reading passage.
Second, lecturer says the employees will not get any advantage as told in the passage as the companies will prefer hiring employees who can work for five days a week. Thus, it not only risks their job stability but their chances of getting promotion will also reduce to a great extent. During recession such workers might even end up losing their job companies might not be interested in keeping such workers.
Last but not the least, speaker further points out that as it is not profitable for either groups, it would be wiser to ask the employees to do the same amount of work in four days in spite of five days. This will solve their purpose as well as it will not affect the company in any way. In addition the employees will also have the better opportunities to get promotion and there will more job stability. Hence, the speaker is not in favour of the passage.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
- Many schools ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you think it is a good idea? Give reasons and details to support your idea. 11
- Letter of Advice - IELTS Writing Task - I, General TestA friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the pro 22
- You successfully passed a job interview You are expected to start on November 15 but you will not be available on that date Task Write a letter to your new boss explaining your situation expressing your concern and suggesting a solution 87
- You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter,Describe the party and how it went.Explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service.Suggest some improvements that the hotel could make. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e new employees, in buying new computers and more office space will be required. ...
^^^
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...and more office space will be required. Moreover the cost of the health benefits will re...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 292, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...l not affect the company in any way. In addition the employees will also have the better...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'in spite of', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250803858521 0.261695866417 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.128617363344 0.158904122519 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707395498392 0.0723426182421 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0707395498392 0.0435111971325 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0353697749196 0.0277247811725 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131832797428 0.128828473217 102% => OK
Participles: 0.032154340836 0.0370669169778 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34873153713 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192926045016 0.0208969081088 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0064308681672 0.00154638098197 416% => OK
Determiners: 0.11575562701 0.128158765124 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0546623794212 0.0158828679856 344% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0064308681672 0.0114777025283 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1637.0 1645.83664459 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 271.125827815 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64482758621 6.08160592843 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306896551724 0.374372842146 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227586206897 0.287516216867 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148275862069 0.187439937562 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0931034482759 0.113142543107 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34873153713 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475862068966 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.0657449792 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3076923077 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8919873519 49.3711431718 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 132.220823453 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.878197800319 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 45.0663129973 50.5018328374 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.76712328767 1.90840788429 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.613668942095 0.549887131256 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140492119055 0.142949733639 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0656869541997 0.0787303798458 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.619062471864 0.631733273073 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130513718771 0.139662658121 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296631708987 0.266732575781 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12961576825 0.103435571967 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.4385471859 0.414875509568 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496418815384 0.0530846634433 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.472639893376 0.40443939384 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900803210451 0.0528353158467 170% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.