Every major city has a public library where people can come to read and gain knowledge. Governments of all nations are spending reasonable amount of time to look after these facilities. But is this attention profitable or is it simply a waste of time? Some people think that there is no need to preserve them as digital technology is more preferred way of learning. Conversely, I discord this notion by giving evidences and justifications further in this essay to validate my view point.
To embark upon, libraries are not merely a place to study rather they are our cultural heritage. It is no exaggeration to claim that without them we will not be able to transfer the invaluable inheritance of history to our off springs. For example, our holy scripture "Bhagwata Geeta" which has been treasured by our ancestors and which has helped us to live life in an ideal way. Without it, it is unimaginable to make our younger generation contemplate the vitality of our values.
Additionally, it provides an appropriate quiet milieu to concentrate on studies. Although, there are various ways to grasp knowledge. However, it is extremely important to study in a quite place in order to focus and to assimilate the learned matter. I can reminisce when I was in college, it was very difficult for me to study in my room due to the commotion caused by other students. In contrast, library was a perfect place to study because of its peaceful environment. Therefore, I always used to go there with my peers to study.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that the benefits of library far outweigh any negative repercussions. The significance of it is inevitable as it not only provides a suitable place to learn but indeed is the crucial part of our rich culture and we must contribute to conserve such facilities for our descents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an ideal way" with adverb for "ideal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rs and which has helped us to live life in an ideal way. Without it, it is unimaginable to make...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...quite milieu to concentrate on studies. Although, there are various ways to grasp knowle...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('place') instead of another adjective.
..., it is extremely important to study in a quite place in order to focus and to assimilate the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90614886731 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01321784505 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0499522528 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0699663883177 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242199116248 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331943019834 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0413604783975 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446051183656 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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