Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past,libraries are most famous place to read books but nowadays,the technology is developing by day to day therefore E-technology are most popular one among the society.As a result of that currently used E-book for reading purpose.
Actually,I totally agree with part of this topic which is mention "maintaining public libraries is wast of time". For example librarian want much time to arrange books are properly.Because they have so many arrangements like by author name, alphabet or books category and also i would like to say as member perspective,sometime they can not borrowed books which is they wanted to read. Because these publications are already took by others.Furthermore common libraries have limited number of copies per book.
In other hand,we can not accept above mention part because some people don't like to use online methods to read books using laptop,tab or other stuff.
In my perspective,digital technology is most power full method than using libraries.Because it is very easy to use.For an instance, any users can access any time to read E-books and quickly find what they wanted books by filtering book name or author name without spending more time.Furthermore many people can access and download E-books,if they want because no limited copies in online.
As a conclusion,due to above mention point I strongly believe "Digital Technology" is friendly and effectively affect our life to time than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
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Essay evaluation report
libraries are most famous place
libraries are the most famous place
which is mention
which mentions
Sentence: For example librarian want much time to arrange books are properly.Because they have so many arrangements like by author name, alphabet or books category and also i would like to say as member perspective,sometime they can not borrowed books which is they wanted to read.
Description: The fragment librarian want much is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and they
we can not accept above mention part
we can not accept above mentioned part
Sentence: In my perspective,digital technology is most power full method than using libraries.Because it is very easy to use.For an instance, any users can access any time to read E-books and quickly find what they wanted books by filtering book name or author name without spending more time.Furthermore many people can access and download E-books,if they want because no limited copies in online.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to power and full
Sentence: As a conclusion,due to above mention point I strongly believe 'Digital Technology' is friendly and effectively affect our life to time than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to libraries and aspect
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Words: 254 350
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1224 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.819 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.491 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.935 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.467 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.824 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , libraries
In the past,libraries are most famous place to read books but...
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... famous place to read books but nowadays,the technology is developing by day to day ...
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Suggestion: As
... are most popular one among the society.As a result of that currently used E-book ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... E-book for reading purpose. Actually,I totally agree with part of this topic w...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...n 'maintaining public libraries is wast of time'. For example librarian wa...
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Suggestion: Because
...much time to arrange books are properly.Because they have so many arrangements like by ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me, alphabet or books category and also i would like to say as member perspective...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sometime
... would like to say as member perspective,sometime they can not borrowed books which is th...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'borrow'
Suggestion: borrow
...ember perspective,sometime they can not borrowed books which is they wanted to read. Bec...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wed books which is they wanted to read. Because these publications are already took by ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...publications are already took by others.Furthermore common libraries have limited number of...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...publications are already took by others.Furthermore common libraries have limited number of...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ber of copies per book. In other hand,we can not accept above mention part becau...
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... above mention part because some people dont like to use online methods to read book...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , tab
...nline methods to read books using laptop,tab or other stuff. In my perspective,di...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , digital
...tab or other stuff. In my perspective,digital technology is most power full method th...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
... power full method than using libraries.Because it is very easy to use.For an instance,...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... power full method than using libraries.Because it is very easy to use.For an instance,...
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Suggestion: For
...ibraries.Because it is very easy to use.For an instance, any users can access any t...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... author name without spending more time.Furthermore many people can access and download E-b...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... author name without spending more time.Furthermore many people can access and download E-b...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...y people can access and download E-books,if they want because no limited copies in ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
...ted copies in online. As a conclusion,due to above mention point I strongly belie...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'libraries'' or 'library's'?
Suggestion: libraries'; library's
...ely affect our life to time than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...fe to time than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...fe to time than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... social libraries aspect.Therefore i am agree with above topic.
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore i am agree with above topic.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282608695652 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.170289855072 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797101449275 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0652173913043 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0398550724638 0.0437548338989 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123188405797 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0326086956522 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.50967613308 2.80594681477 125% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398550724638 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0471014492754 0.0861772015684 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018115942029 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108695652174 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1528.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 316.048096192 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44725738397 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367088607595 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26582278481 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172995780591 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139240506329 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50967613308 2.80594681477 125% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 67.1200760209 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 33.8571428571 20.7743622355 163% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7012872925 49.517814964 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.285714286 127.492653851 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.7743622355 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.814263465372 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 3.99599198397 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.4394213382 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.59210526316 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255930743389 0.332605444948 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101997580674 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.067794907214 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.790374076848 0.534860350844 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.257116420671 0.148594505496 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135355584204 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740802649378 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.179565817223 0.324371583561 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0293806988968 0.0638462369009 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147252636233 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543406752499 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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