Every species on this planet is vital for the smooth functioning of the natural biological cycle. But is it appropriate to spend money on the conservation of the species that are at verge of becoming extinct? Although, many people think that the money spend on the projects to save the endangered species is not worthy as they are not an essential part of the society. However, I stand with millions of people who firmly believe that it is crucial to save them to avoid any disruption in the ecosystem.
Firstly, all the animals holds an significant place in the normal biological cycle, if any one of them will disappear then it may lead to detrimental effects. I can say this assertively by giving a simple example of vulture. As, we all are aware that vultures survive on flesh which in turn helps to keep the environment clean. If, this species will vanish from earth, it will become impossible to sustain because whenever any animal will die, its body will start rotting. this will not only pollute the atmosphere but will also result in the development of bacteria.
Secondly, in nature every animal needs place to live as humans do, without it, many animals will start migrating to other populated areas and this will arise a huge problem. To elaborate, all animals living in forests are enforced to move to the areas where human population resides. It is happening due to the deforestation occurring on large scale to fulfill the greedy demands of human beings. Thus, more humans are being killed by carnivorous animals nowadays as there place of living is being taken away from them.
To recapitulate, nature has its own way of functioning and though, it is self sufficient but due to the interference of the humans, the natural biological cycle has been disturbed. As a result of which our planet is exposed to many serious threats in the form of natural calamities such as flood, drought, earthquake etc. Now, it is us, who are solely responsible for this damage, so, it is our duty to fix this problem. In order, to do so, we will have to put in efforts along with money which is required for the huge projects that are being conducted to save endangered animals and so our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that are at verge of becoming extinct? Although, many people think that the money spend...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...stem. Firstly, all the animals holds an significant place in the normal biologi...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... by giving a simple example of vulture. As, we all are aware that vultures survive...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... will die, its body will start rotting. this will not only pollute the atmosphere bu...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ening due to the deforestation occurring on large scale to fulfill the greedy dem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7421875 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60395702281 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6505032629 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105810243813 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358223513901 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588583797259 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715925128987 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692773388986 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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