In modern world, although, there are several problems to deal with but crime is the most dangerous issue that needs utmost attention. Some people think that nothing can be done to stop people to get indulged in crime. However, I firmly believe, if we try to resolve the difficulties of young generation due to which they are constrained to do crime then we can certainly fight against this social stigma.
Though, there are a slew of factors responsible for the rapid rise of crime but the two most important causes are discussed here. Firstly, increased rate of unemployment, nowadays, youth is frustrated and discomfited as in spite of being qualified they do not get descent jobs and handsome salary which is required to satiate their necessities. This not only makes them vulnerable but also incline them towards this evil world.
Secondly, technology has also contributed to it to a great extent because through it, it is quite feasible to acquire knowledge on any objectionable subject such as on how to make fatal explosives at home. In addition, there are many TV programmes which are based on true crime stories. This indeed shows sundry ways to perform a perfect crime.
To recapitulate, there is no such thing called "Perfect Crime" and one should make the young generation aware of this fact. This can only be done by providing free education by the government as it will enlighten their minds and make them more poised to differentiate between right and wrong. Furthermore, government must provide more employment opportunities as well as it will recede poverty in our country because hunger eventually leads to crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_DECENT_DESCENT[2]
Message: Did you mean 'decent'?
Suggestion: decent
...pite of being qualified they do not get descent jobs and handsome salary which is requi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08455882353 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83025919421 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9807601872 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219847124259 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750579999905 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500630567256 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122386857489 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650646490799 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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