Every person has its own way of collecting information; some people think it is better to get information through one source only as it is quite feasible for them and inexpensive too. On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of taking information by various ways are far outweigh than the first choice due to the following reasons and justifications.
First, it is not always good to rely on only one source of information. In today’s modern world, competition is very tough and journalism is not an exception to it. In fact, this is a field in which people can do anything to sell their news and to increase the so called “TRP” of their channels or news papers. I can say this strongly as recently I observed that how news reporters and channels fabricate the actual fact and present it in a entirely different way for example in case of a JNU student, Krishna who was accused to be a rebel as he was marching and provoking students against our country and prime minister Modi ji. However, few channels showed him as innocent and gave incorrect and incomplete information to the mass and tried to misguide.
Second, nowadays all have busy schedule and don’t have time to specially watch news. Now, people are so extremely busy in their lives which do not allow them to take out spare time just for the news. Although, everyone is interested in knowing the latest news and to keep them updated but it is not possible for many of them to sit, relax and watch news on TV comfortably. Thus, I think other sources of information are good substitutes such as internet. It is the best way to know what is happening around within no time. In addition, it is convenient to carry laptop or mobile phones anywhere and watch the news of one’s choice without having to spend extra money and time. I see people watching news in cars and metro train while travelling which is incredible.
To recapitulate, I would like to assert that although there are many people who would like to stick to their old fashion ways of collecting knowledge as they are habituated of it and feel more comfortable using them. Conversely, young generation prefer the new sources of information and make the best use of them. They not only save time, money and energy but they indeed enjoy using these high tech gadgets for various other purposes as well.
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...ay for example in case of a JNU student, Krishna who was accused to be a rebel as...
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...ets for various other purposes as well.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215517241379 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.165948275862 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948275862069 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0689655172414 0.046263068375 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0689655172414 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105603448276 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0323275862069 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68901869543 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0431034482759 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00215517241379 0.00188951952338 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.0538793103448 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00862068965517 0.0209618222197 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.0139019557991 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2364.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 413.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72397094431 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290556900726 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217917675545 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169491525424 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108958837772 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68901869543 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56416464891 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.3507557249 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2941176471 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3765216233 48.84282405 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.058823529 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 46.0858852015 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.16312056738 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260590773316 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990462030017 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0630333820487 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51046498149 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146979660376 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106965786468 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466294762167 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395387868694 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0844790254038 0.067059652881 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184421958232 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312166277954 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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