You recently found out that the local council has decided to demolish a particular building in your area. You disagree with this decision and believe that the building is beneficial for the community. Write a letter to the local councilor.
In your letter
explain what you find valuable about the building.
suggest what improvements could be made to the building.
describe how retaining the building could benefit the community as a whole.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in great health. I am writing to express my disagreement with the destructive decision for building number 45 in society. My name is James Gosling and I have been a Co-operative Society resident for 25 years.
As per my understanding, building number 45 has been decided to be demolished starting from next week to build open ground. I would like to bring to your notice that this three-story building is the central part of the community equidistant from each other buildings
The Destruction of it should not be the only solution, rather it can be utilized for multipurpose like converting floors into the library, hall, or sports club. Another use can be that it can be used for commercial means for the members of the club.
This idea can be a lot more helpful for people living in this community. They can make the best out of it. Therefore, I am requesting you to kindly please reiterate the decision once again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
James Gosling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88172043011 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77306803875 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0479682033 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258058550288 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891791107469 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429621625203 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118754360392 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620384581668 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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