You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
- When did it happen?
- Describe the problem.
- Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing this letter to report a massive leak from the water pipes in my appartment.
I can confirm that the issue happened in the afternoon yesterday because I left my place at 10 am. When I came back from work at 6 pm, it already occurred.
As I entered my apartment, I witnessed a complete mess with water everywhere in the living room. The floor and my couch were all wet and very dirty. I then traced the source of this problem and found out that it was due to a massive leak from the water pipes in my bathroom. Afterward, I tried to cover these pipes with towels and tapes and was able to stop the leaking but I do not think that it would last very long.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you could send someone to have a look at this situation and fix it. Since the pipes are very old now, it would be best if you agreed to replace the entire water system in my apartment to make sure this problem would not occur again in the future.
I hope you would help me with this issue as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26829268293 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23928475026 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1814263305 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195326123243 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735941636986 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322425324986 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100662588704 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173234543299 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.