You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. Ali,
I am writing to you regarding a water leakage that I found in my kitchen in today's morning. unfortunately, it is a serious issue that should be solved promptly.
As I mentioned, I woke up today's morning to find that water had flooded in all around the kitchen, it seems to be happened earlier at night and because we were sleeping, nobody recognised it until we have waken up. And while I was trying to figure out the reason for such a problem, I realised that the main pipe under the sink was broken, although I tried to fix it by myself, unfortunately, the situation became worse and the water leaked harder than before. I am afraid that some electronic devices in the kitchen could be broken as a result.
To solve the matter, I ask for your prompt help to provide me a professional plumber, whom your company inquires for such an issue, as I remember his name is James, he had properly repaired our neighbour's pipes last week, hence I think he can fix ours too. And if he can come today, I will pay the expenses, on account I may be responsible for worsening the problem.
Please give this matter your immediate attention.
Yours Sincerely,
Sara Eltantawy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Ali, I am writing to you regarding a water le...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... found in my kitchen in todays morning. unfortunately, it is a serious issue that should be s...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'wakened'.
Suggestion: wakened
...ing, nobody recognised it until we have waken up. And while I was trying to figure ou...
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Line 13, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... responsible for worsening the problem. Please give this matter your immediate a...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ediate attention. Yours Sincerely, Sara Eltantawy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, regarding, so, while, i think, as a result, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64951836024 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6259462572 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186357884826 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707005785736 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00951581280252 0.0603063233224 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956305113663 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017754811098 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.