You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. Joseph,
I am writing this letter to complain about the serious issue that I am facing because of water leaking from ceiling.
The leakage started after the heavy rain on last Sunday. Prior to that, I had faced the same issue when I rented this house during last year monsoon. After thorough investigation, it came to light that there is no water outlet on the terrace, which is blocking all the water from rain.
Consequently, all the accumulated water starts to dip through the ceiling and making the top floor uninhabitable during monsoon. Not only all my furniture is getting ruined due to constant contact with water but also it is ruining the paint. As a tenant, I have to bear the cost of repaint as per the rental agreement, which is going to cost me a fortune if proper precautions are not taken on time.
I would really appreciate if you can send an experienced plumber to tackle this nightmare as soon as possible. If that is not possible I can book one by myself if you can provide a reimbursement later. But, it has to be addressed immediately.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64393424884 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651960784314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1197438384 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168435103287 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509562534526 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432443942563 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079703305665 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568092909655 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.