Dear Mr Andrey,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards a leaking tap in my kitchen. I am a tenant of your's from around 5 years residing in flat no. 535.
We went to Canada last month for discovering new places over there. When we came back , our kitchen was fully messed with leaking water every side and all the utensils were floating on the surface,
You are requested to please look in this issue as we have tried everything to fix it like applied m-seal over the pipe but nothing worked. Please call to the plumber and make him to visit out apartment and fix this tap as early as possible.
Hope you will take this problem as serious issue and will resolve it as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jack jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...new places over there. When we came back , our kitchen was fully messed with leaki...
^^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e utensils were floating on the surface, You are requested to please look in this...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ible. Yours faithfully, Jack jones
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 620.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55882352941 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22439791434 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735294117647 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5424576594 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151076794147 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642039389558 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439184593944 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782447958661 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372340823801 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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