It is an old age thought that work can defined as a gender specific job. Although, there is a group in our society which still believe in this assumption. I oppose this point of view and in the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss reasons behind my perception.
To embark on, there are plethora of reasons why I think men and women are doing well all types jobs equally. First and foremost, in this ultra-modern environment all people beside of their gender have to do every type of work to earn their livelihood. Moreover, government is encouraging girl power to get in to the front line and make themselves independent. For instance, in India central authority is providing subsidy on education as well as employment benefits only to girls to motivate them.
Apart from this, physical strength make difference among men and women is a traditional thought which is not true now a days. Practically, current environment is of mental ability and it is universal truth that all human beings have equal mental strength and potential to do every kind of task. To exemplify, women are becoming pilots of fighter jets and men are employed as a chef and both are doing great to follow their individual dreams.
To sum up, it is passion of an individual which drives them to do a particular job. There is nothing to do with the gender of a human being to follow their dreams.
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:.Ask for some time off to complete a qualification..Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off..Say 78
- You recently started work in a new company.Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter- Explain why you changed jobs-Describe tour new job-tellhim/her your other news 73
- You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event:1. Explain why you are interested in helping2. give details suitable past experience3. suggest ways you might help with the event 73
- A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:•explain what you are currently doing•describe your suitability for this area of work• 56
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k can defined as a gender specific job. Although, there is a group in our society which ...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...a traditional thought which is not true now a days. Practically, current environment is of...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...aditional thought which is not true now a days. Practically, current environment is of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, i think, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71660275998 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6446547552 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236521268817 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079880125978 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636075633101 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134823762947 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557523636971 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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