you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.
Dear Bombay,
I am writing to appreciate your helping return my driver's license I misplaced two weeks ago,inside the Lagos rapid transport bus plying Ogudu- Ketu axis, on my way from work.
you saved me the troubles of obtaining a new one,which I would have undergone a rigorous and hectic processes of getting a another one, which might take a month or more, hindering me from driving to the office when the need arises.
I am curious to know how and where the card was found,I remembered opening my wallet inside the vehicle when I wanted to pay for the tickets but i am not sure if I left the wallet in the process. I even thought the wallet had been stolen.
I would like to appreciate your kind gestures in my own little way,especially since such attitudes Is difficult to come by in recent times, please confirm how best I can reach you so I can hand over the gift I have for you.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Bombay, I am writing to appreciate your helping ...
^^^
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , inside
...rivers license I misplaced two weeks ago,inside the Lagos rapid transport bus plying Og...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...gudu- Ketu axis, on my way from work. you saved me the troubles of obtaining a ne...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...d me the troubles of obtaining a new one,which I would have undergone a rigorous and h...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...igorous and hectic processes of getting a another one, which might take a month ...
^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rocesses of getting a another one, which might take a month or more, hindering me...
^^
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...to know how and where the card was found,I remembered opening my wallet inside the...
^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hen I wanted to pay for the tickets but i am not sure if I left the wallet in the...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... thought the wallet had been stolen. I would like to appreciate your kind gest...
^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
... your kind gestures in my own little way,especially since such attitudes Is difficult to co...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Is difficult to come by in recent times, please confirm how best I can reach you...
^^
Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n recent times, please confirm how best I can reach you so I can hand over the g...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an hand over the gift I have for you. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Yours faithfully,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54022988506 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4988040474 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3824075351 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16771777597 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704758108715 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519278504988 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851660659148 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050791245731 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.