you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.•How important the licence is to you•Asking how he/she found it•Saying how you would love to thank him/her.-Work and proof of identity-Where you found

Essay topics:

you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
• How important the licence is to you
• Asking how he/she found it
• Saying how you would love to thank him/her.

- Work and proof of identity
- Where you found it
- Take you out for dinner

Dear Mr. Steven

It was very surprising to receive a letter from a complete stranger and that to with my lost driving license. I usually do not open letters from the anonymous sender but I felt something heavy inside the envelope hence I decided to check and it was unbelievable to see my license.

It is very crucial to me because I drive to work everyday and without a license, going anywhere is a criminal offence. Furthermore, it can be used to create false identity if anyone tries to misuse such document, which is quite often these days.

I am curious where exactly you found it because I had looked almost everywhere when I realized that I lost it? If I know my mistakes, I will be more attentive about keeping it safe in future.

Nevertheless, I cannot thank you enough for going your way out to return it. If you do not mind, I would love to take you out for a lovely dinner to show how grateful I am. It would be a great pleasure to meet generous man like you.

Thanks again and I hope to hear from you very soon.

Best wishes,
Sandip Ramani

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y crucial to me because I drive to work everyday and without a license, going anywhere i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...be more attentive about keeping it safe in future. Nevertheless, I cannot thank you en...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ery soon. Best wishes, Sandip Ramani
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42929292929 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46653450618 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1601923023 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270635401643 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925748402882 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911609317538 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132218628625 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100734310634 0.0580467560999 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.