You recently moved house and you used a removal company to help you move
your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move.
Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter
• Give details of the move
• Describe the damage
• Say what you would like the manager to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am Munish Jazz, dweller of Hudson Street, Toronto penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint against the breakdown of my personal stuff. Since, your shipping agency was liable for the movement of goods, thus I want you to get acquainted with the current scenario.
Last Thursday, i hired your professional team for shifting my household goods and other belongings from Old School to Hudson Street because of my sudden shift in residence due to relocation of the job. Sadly, my items were not properly packed and loaded in the truck.
Regrettably, i am not at all satisfied with your services as most of the fragile and antique items have been damaged and broken apart. Moreover, one of my suitcase is missing from the luggage. Therefore, it would a grateful gesture of yours if you could pay off the expenses for the loss as it was mentioned in the contract.
I will be very glad if you would fulfill your accountability.
yours faithfully
Munish Jazz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... breakdown of my personal stuff. Since, your shipping agency was liable for the move...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the current scenario. Last Thursday, i hired your professional team for shifti...
^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ods and other belongings from Old School to Hudson Street because of my sudden sh...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd loaded in the truck. Regrettably, i am not at all satisfied with your servi...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...u would fulfill your accountability. yours faithfully Munish Jazz
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64628692079 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.185210977 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160514442148 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685177478554 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494054901608 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976314461798 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378477305386 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.