Dear Sir or Madam:
My name is Juliana Warren, I have ordered five print nail set on 6th April. The purchase number is TH56789023 and I paid with my VISA 789256341235. I always buy in your shop, the quality and good attention are the best. Unfortunately, in this last purchase, I had some problems.
The package arrived four days later and when I opened, I discovered that instead five sets only there was one. I am very disappointed because I need all the sets as presents at a party next week. Maybe there is a possibility to fix it.
I would like that the company sends me the missing sets as soon as possible, and of course, I want free shipping because the mistake was yours. I have already paid for the lost sets, so I consider is a fair agreement. Please let me know shortly to confirm the arrangement I am proposing to you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Juliana Warren.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...Maybe there is a possibility to fix it. I would like that the company sends me t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you Juliana Warren.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36206896552 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5656462395 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9157528324 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796091944837 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259099407143 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229011064065 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486043781681 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185168365418 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.