You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter.
Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery.
Explain the importance of this delivery
ask for a replacement item to be sent.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a frequent customer of your web store and hold a gold membership. I am writing to express my deep disappointment regarding my recent purchase from your company's online store on 5th January.
Allow me to elaborate, I placed an order (order number #D4555) for MI 4 Pro Smart TV from your company website. It was a blue color 42 inches android based television and recently launched. I received my order within the given time frame and I was quite impressed with the delivery. However, when I unboxed it, I found that TV's remote control and user's manual were missing. I was distress to experience such type of service from your company.
Furthermore, I think it is worth to mention that I was quite excited when MI company launched this product in the market. Without any delay, I decided to purchase this TV because I wanted to enjoy Cricket World Cup-2020 on the large screen. Moreover, my children wish to enjoy watch Youtube on the smart TV. This delivery was vital for me and my family. Unfortunately, it does work as it was expected.
I, therefore, I would like you to address my concern on a priority basis because it is all about your company's reputation and goodwill. I would like you to replace the item with the new one. I am quite certain this time your company will not disappoint me. Moreover, I would not mind placing my next order from your eCommerce website if you could offer me an attractive discount.
I look forward to receiving a replacement.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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| 2023-01-04 | ielts_tony | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: order
... Allow me to elaborate, I placed an order order number #D4555 for MI 4 Pro Smart TV fro...
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Line 17, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u to replace the item with the new one. I am quite certain this time your company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81040892193 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79130918627 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6436177767 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270778021478 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854125087146 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514637633616 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122128138553 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789342107283 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.