Dear sir,
I would like to bring kind notice to you that food which was served for 'Meeting for Master's under Amico worldwide limited ,on 23 October was below expectation.
This meeting was a prime special meeting for our company with regards to its current costumers and as well as, improving business perspectives. Arrangements for this meeting were given to your planning and management department , and they performed very well on certain aspects like excellent seating arrangement , stage and microphone function, and power power presentations except few.
We have taken feedback from our attendee's ,regarding overall meeting and it had came out that only area which people complaint was food.Even myself had encountered that most of displayed food items were either cold or not much food for people.Presentation and taste for non-vegetarian dishes were complete dismay.There were only one item was there in menu for vegetarians. Furthermore, there was no dessert left for people who ate at the last.
I would like you to justify why this could happen when we paid as per your demand? I want you to look into this matter as my company asking that they will be paying only half for what we got.
your's faithfully
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which was served for Meeting for Masters under Amico worldwide limited ,on 23 Oc...
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Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r Masters under Amico worldwide limited ,on 23 October was below expectation. ...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sters under Amico worldwide limited ,on 23 October was below expectation. This...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... your planning and management department , and they performed very well on certain...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pects like excellent seating arrangement , stage and microphone function, and powe...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: power
...nt , stage and microphone function, and power power presentations except few. We have take...
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Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e have taken feedback from our attendees ,regarding overall meeting and it had cam...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...s ,regarding overall meeting and it had came out that only area which people complai...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...ly area which people complaint was food.Even myself had encountered that most of dis...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Presentation
...either cold or not much food for people.Presentation and taste for non-vegetarian dishes wer...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...-vegetarian dishes were complete dismay.There were only one item was there in menu fo...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Furthermore, there was no dessert left for people who ate at the last. I would...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...be paying only half for what we got. yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07462686567 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84298342973 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696517412935 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.501703185 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.714285714 76.5299724578 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235411752912 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102763519099 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404171493142 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141344620604 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335639036375 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.