You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
In your letter:
say what the participants liked about the hotel
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to give feedback about your hotel, On the 3rd June my company had meeting on Nevada Hotel close to Giant supper market.
Actually my team satisfied with all the service sauch as the air cooler was good, the room was clean and tidy, the desk also large anough, and also the receptionist was kind to us, but we ware disappointed with the food that was served for lunch the meat is too hard, and the sop is to salty, furthermore we can not enjoy our lunch, and when we spoke to the chef she just said sorry and there is no other option from her eventhough we have push him to make another menu but they said all material was emty, so we have to order another food from restaurant close to hotel.
Please make some pusnishment or remainder for your chef, just because of her we don't enjoy our meeting on your hotel.
Hopefully this could make a lesson to improve your chef performance
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Ardy Hilmawan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and consideration. Yours Faithfully, Ardy Hilmawan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55737704918 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29714973206 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.456714242 44.8134815571 425% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.8 76.5299724578 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.6 16.8248392259 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269826281112 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13157097793 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591821611849 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138594594891 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650374302909 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 8.37731958763 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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