You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to share some experience at your hotel Sulin in Six-mile. Our company i.e. TCS had organised a meeting on 29th March 2019 which was held at your hotel. We had asked our all participants to fill up a feedback form prior leaving the hall at end of the day.
The hospitality of your guest relationship department made our participants delighted. Moreover, the environment of the hotel which was well decorated with fresh followers was also appreciated. The best thing they like about this hotel is the location, which is a convenient one for each participant, as it is situated in the heart of the city.
However, they were a little disappointed about the food that was server at your hotel, since it was neither served hot not properly cooked.
So, I would like to advise you regarding the same. Please make sure before you serve, the food is properly cooked and it should be served as well. one person should be appointed to look after the <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">food </span>quality because people may appreciated the hospitality but if they experience bad food quality, do you think people will visit your place.
Looking froward to seeing you serving the best food in the entire city. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Simi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
...oked. So, I would like to advise you regarding the same. Please make sure before you s...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...cooked and it should be served as well. one person should be appointed to look afte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01843317972 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09881022601 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4799393352 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7692307692 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393192793479 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112867985619 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072902514346 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190860011597 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776055239923 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.