You recently organized an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In there feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
In you essay say
What the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
dear sir,
I am writing in connection with the meeting of our organization held at your hotel The Stella on 20th October Saturday. I would like to thank you for hosting us, however, I want to show concern about the food served to us.
Most of the people in that meeting were quite satisfied with the venue. Infact they really like the hotel facilities and amenities as it is quite spacious with lovely seating arrangements. some reported that your customer service is especially great i am so delighted to thank you for that.
The thing that I want to draw your attention on is the quality of food. Majority of the participants complained that the food was uncooked. Also, some dishes like breads were served cold and some of the people felt that the food was stale. This was really unexpected from such renowned hotel like yours.
I would like to suggest you to give more attention to food quality as it can ruin you reputation. I hope you will consider my suggestion and improve you food.
Thank you again and best wishes.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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...ur customer service is especially great i am so delighted to thank you for that. ...
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...dishes like breads were served cold and some of the people felt that the food was stale. Th...
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...gain and best wishes. Yours sincerely XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72043010753 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45928811773 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6528568511 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5384615385 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346588855401 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10715867849 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330828053133 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169840127684 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575273419995 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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