You recently read article in a newspaper about your child’s Freind with you lost contact for a long timeWrite a letter to editorSay which edition do the article appearExplain why you lost contactSay how you want them to help you get back in touch

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You recently read article in a newspaper about your child’s Freind with you lost contact for a long time
Write a letter to editor
Say which edition do the article appear
Explain why you lost contact
Say how you want them to help you get back in touch

Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to inform that last week 3rd April 2019 evening edition, I read an article about Mr. Andre as a sport person. Thee was also his picture in the article, eventually I realised that he is the same person studied with me in high school and good friend of mine.
Due to my father’s transfer to another city after high school we had to shift our place and less connectivity issue made me helpless to be in contact and continued touch with him. It’s been more than two decades that we have not met.
However this article made me hopeful to get reconnected to my friend and I am great full for his chance. It’s been requested to you to share his contact details with me if possible as per your policy or I am sharing my contact details under this letter, so that I can be contacted.
I will be obliged for this favour.

Regards,
Sheetal Goel
Phone 9911114967

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...than two decades that we have not met. However this article made me hopeful to get rec...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53048780488 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45230378883 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0805352112 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149271289862 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504853675572 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457341089177 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742825143685 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507272627372 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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