Dear Jessica,
Hope you are doing great and was happy to receive an epistle from you after such a long time. With reference to your correspondence, I understand that you are in a predicament whether to opt for studies or work.
It's high time you search for a job. You have completed Post-Graduation and many companies are welcoming fresh graduates. In case, you choose to go to college again, you will be labelled as over-qualified with zero experience after two or three years. Hence, I admonish you to choose professional life. Furthermore, I think you would neither enjoy nor get much out of college now. The main reason is that you are already a Post-Graduate and students will find it arduous to mingle with you or respect you too much for being senior. Therefore, in my opinion, you will later realize it onerous studying.
Moreover, going to work will absolutely be a great choice, because, you will get to know how things work in the outside world. Don't you enjoy putting your knowledge and learning in practice? I ensure you that you will be excited and enticed being a full-time employee, if you choose the one that works out for you. Although you want to study now, it will be beneficial for you in the future.
So, if you ask me, I supplicate to opt for choosing an occupation, however, will invigorate any decision taken by you. I look forward to hearing your resolution.
Till next time,
Rena.
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- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree? Give your opinion and explain both views. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...w how things work in the outside world. Dont you enjoy putting your knowledge and le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in my opinion, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74596774194 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7561272908 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4106748636 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5625 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265313897831 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990213600113 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618334339003 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169026023691 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555915413832 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.