You recently received a letter from a friend aking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Nam
I am writing this letter to suggest you that you had better look forward a job in order to earn money to help your parents who have tried their hand in various jobs before coming back to teaching because of you.
As you know, most of the students who have graduated from universities are mostly unemployed in last 10 years. Moreover, your two younger brothers are waiting for you to support them with their education.
First and foremost, you should look back on yourself and what your parents were expecting as you are not heathy enough like some your friends whom I have known recently. In addition, in a developing society, there are a bunch of jobs for you to work in order to make money such as: waiter at restaurant, school bus driver. Furthermore, you can choose to work in the areas which are either close to my company so I can pick you up every day or near the beach with higher salary.
I remind you so because, generally, I have more experience than you.
Hope to see you soon
Best regards
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...n, in a developing society, there are a bunch of jobs for you to work in order to mak...
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Line 6, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perience than you. Hope to see you soon Best regards Bill
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, in addition, mind you, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50802139037 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33010306817 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3162038438 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218851882727 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915129070732 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478505975508 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119382568794 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505763265649 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.