A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets lots of exercise and avoid stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern society, a strong people are often related with somebody who has a balance diet, gets much of exercise and reduce stress. In Vietnam, most people have several methods to keep healthy fit in their ways.
Firstly, human need to require a balance diet and to avoid unhealthy food can make various health problems. In addition, most young people prefer fast food to traditional meal because they are cheap to buy and quite easy to prepare. However, they excessive contain too much fat, salt and sugar. As a result, the proportion of obesity, diabetes and heart disease are on the increasing day by day. For instance, according to the reports of Ministry of education, which is public declare every year that a lot of students who studying at primary school are increasingly overweight.
Secondly, the regular exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy body. Nowadays, the Vietnamese adult are almost relax by watching TV and children play video games rather than doing outdoor activities. Moreover, the Vietnamese citizens tend to walk less and do almost desk job without exercise. Therefore, the calories have not been burnt out by exercise, so it is easy to become unhealthy body such as bones and muscles. Although Vietnam government has encouraged local authorities to develop the Private Healthcare system, it’s still unfair because only wealthy people can afford it.
Thirdly, people should change some bad habits in order to reduce stress or to prevent mental disorders such as working less over time, taking holidays and making leisure time as a priority.
In conclusion, creative people often use more and more organic food; keep fit to stay healthy in order to control their lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...wadays, the Vietnamese adult are almost relax by watching TV and children play video ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54829875223 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6387230042 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156260203333 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467807741626 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447979730524 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854800236286 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457766768335 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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