Health is a term which has broader meaning than it just sounds. A person's health is the sum of his physical and mental fitness. Present day life styles have a serious impact on each person's overall well being. People are nowadays trying to live a healthy life pattern rather than running with the flow of life.
we can see a drastic change over in people's mindset regarding staying fit. It is mainly because of the health problems they face, youngsters are treated for obesity related problems during their earlier ages of life its self. we can only blame our food habit for this shocking scenario. Professionals are always busy with their work, so they don't get enough time to cook their food or do any physical activities. Eventually they may end up in relying on fast foods which contains high fat contents and added flavours which are of great threat to their body. When they become aware of this situation, they tried to do regular exercises which are simple and effective like jogging and cycling. Furthermore food habits are also shifting, people are including more organic and less fat content foods in their daily diet. Eventhough fast food outlets are still popular in our country, consumers always keep an eye on the health aspect of the food they consume as compared to the past. We can see this positive change around us, nowadays if we go for a walk in the morning or evening we will get many companions despite age and gender.
Tp put it in a nutshell, there is a positive change in the minds of people towards the importance of keeping fit both in body and mind. Thats is main reason behind the increasing popularity of practices like yoga and exercises like jogging and swimming.
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 67
- the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- the pie chart show the electricity generated in Germany and france from all sources and renewables in the year 2009 summarize the information by selecting and reporting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
- modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans does this have a positive or negative effect on people give your own opinions and examples 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71476510067 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34876556902 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3511280746 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888150528424 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297759607916 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201377664254 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551410904011 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00890225370563 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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