Dear Sam,
I received your letter regarding your confusion about going to college or getting a job and I am glad that you sent me this question.
To begin with, I wouldn’t recommend you to attend any college as I don’t think you will enjoy it very much given to your practical nature. As you think about things rationally and like to make your path yourself, the college would be just a waste of time and funds for you.
Therefore, I would suggest you look for a suitable job for now. I know that you are destined to do great things but college will help you in no way to achieve your goals. Also at this moment, you should support your family as after the demise of your father, you are the head of it and everyone is looking at you with great expectations. If you decide to go to college at this time, it will worsen the financial condition of your family. Hence, it is significant that you take a job for now.
Furthermore, as you have a keen interest in cars and auto parts, you can take the job of a mechanic in any garage. If you don’t know, where to look for such jobs, I can help you out here. However, if you are not interested in this type of work, you can choose to be a salesperson in a car showroom. Let me know, if you need any help finding these jobs or if you have any other thoughts.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Sumit Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lp you in no way to achieve your goals. Also at this moment, you should support your...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...room. Let me know, if you need any help finding these jobs or if you have any other tho...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25855513308 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33742289886 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7288175911 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1538461538 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341213893155 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148815723708 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612858672073 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218302171552 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877368631592 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.