Dear John,
I have received your letter for assistance in deciding the choice between college and job. I am really glad that you preferred me as a helping hand.
As I can see that you are already in mature age, I suggest you to lean in favour of going office rather than educational institute. Also the college you mentioned in the letter doesn't seems to be desirable for your current skill-sets.
According to me It would be quite reasonable and sensible for you to pick a working in industry as per your family prosperity. It also pay the dues you have since long pending from bank.
AS your skills suggest, there are certain kind of positions for you in Automotive industries like Machine Operator, Instrument Reader, Quality Analyst etc. Nevertheless, it is advisable that you opt for CAD designer owing to the fact that you are having CAD certificate and moreover it pays you well.
Though its your judgement call to relish either of it, my strong advise would always be toward getting placed in a organisation where there is continues stuffing of penny in your pocket. Let me know any further help, I will be there for you.
See you soon,
Amol
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...fice rather than educational institute. Also the college you mentioned in the letter...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...the college you mentioned in the letter doesnt seems to be desirable for your current ...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... desirable for your current skill-sets. According to me It would be quite reasonable and sensib...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pays'?
Suggestion: pays
... as per your family prosperity. It also pay the dues you have since long pending fr...
^^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... your skills suggest, there are certain kind of positions for you in Automotive indu...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...and moreover it pays you well. Though its your judgement call to relish either of...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ould always be toward getting placed in a organisation where there is continues s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73891625616 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56830302846 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7070853705 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268688678752 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10599841654 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413699433531 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150205667939 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458570616027 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.