Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing in response to your request as to whether it is best for you to take a job or enroll in a college course.
First off, let me say that I am delighted and honored to see your confidence in my opinion. But to the matter at hand, I strenuously insist that you take on a job for now because it will be more beneficial for you at this moment. As you know, I graduated from college a few years ago and struggled to secure a position for myself that was related to my field of study. So, I suggest not to waste 2 years of your life and a significant amount of money because there is a high chance you will end up in the same situation I was in.
Instead, by taking a job, you will be financially secure, and in a more suitable time, you can continue your education. As of what kind of job will be more lucrative, knowing your mentality and qualifications, I recommend taking a full-time vocation such as a broker job in transportation industry because it is convenient, salary-wise rewarding, and it does not need a college degree.
I hope you will be successful in your job hunt.
All the best,
Willie
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- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing Some think this is good while others believe this is a problem for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 82
- Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:•Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.•Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.•Say how the qualification helps your job or company. 73
- It is a positive thing that people who are in senior management positions in companies have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organization.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... am writing in response to your request as to whether it is best for you to take a job or enr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as to, kind of, such as, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71028965137 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4571615639 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226959558255 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985790760215 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532424110702 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163893128317 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422183630218 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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