DEAR IGOR,
I hope you receive the letter in the best of health. I was very happy to receive the letter from you. I felt great that you decided to write to me for seeking advice.
Firstly, I have always considered you my brother. As such, I will try to be honest with my suggestion. Before I begin, I’d like to say that it is common to face these issues at the time when you are about to graduate.
Secondly, as far as I know you I can say that you will not enjoy going to University as you are the kind of person who does not have faith in the traditional teaching. I would say that getting a job would be a good idea for you as it will help you to embark on your own journey towards the goal you have set.
Finally, I know that you have always been interested in cooking. I think it would better for you to go ahead and do something in the area of cooking. You will make a great cook.
I hope that you will consider my suggestion and plan accordingly.
Best wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y happy to receive the letter from you. I felt great that you decided to write to...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he time when you are about to graduate. Secondly, as far as I know you I can say...
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Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccordingly. Best wishes, Brad Jason
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18556701031 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26318599339 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561855670103 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1051473187 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4615384615 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316464963863 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112471109754 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06767713487 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171897388656 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740608302129 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.