You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :
1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Grame,
I received your letter the day before. I am very glad to know that you need my advice in your precious and momentous decision of your life.
Well to commence with, In our contemporary society, its better to be in job seeing the mammoth of unemployment prospects instead of going to college. Your thinking is different from your generation as you are a special kind of person who always in search of using hid free time rather than wasting like other students. I guess you will not enjoy their company as they would be inept in front of your know-how about life skills. You need to try for a job as it would be an exemplary idea to enhance your skills of understanding the concepts of being a successful entrepreneur, As you want this from your school days. The most paramount and required thing is to understand that which type of job will help you to find a lucrative way to grow your carrier in a flourishing manner.
You can search for a job of hotel manager, accountant or receptionist which helps you to understand and make you able to do yours chores responsibly.
I hope my advice will help you in taking your important decision of life.
I am eagerly waiting for you response on your life changing decision.
Your's truly,
Vinod Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 700, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
... understand that which type of job will help you to find a lucrative way to grow your carrier in...
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Line 4, column 754, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a flourishing manner" with adverb for "flourishing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd a lucrative way to grow your carrier in a flourishing manner. You can search for a job of hotel m...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decision. Yours truly, Vinod Chauhan
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64159292035 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62578838912 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.781984181 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269286302349 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10644486669 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400164552316 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145104005191 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497824206447 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.