you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
Dear Sara,
Hi, I hope everything is going well. I am glad that finally received a letter from you. You probably dont konw that I finished my college then start working. After some years, I decided to continue my study, to get more skills and become more qualified. Honestly, after being an expert at the telecom company, I understood that what my work character is. So, I changed my field of study in master. If I were you, I would study and go to college after too much research.
College is the place that you get more information about your future career and you become an expert. In the other hand, professors at the college could help you to get your job sooner and the problem of job seeking will be less.
eventually, I hope that you get your best decision and I wish you success in which you have chosen.
With Love,
Shima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, Hi, I hope everything is going well. I a...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...finally received a letter from you. You probably dont konw that I finished my college then st...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eceived a letter from you. You probably dont konw that I finished my college then st...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eventually
... problem of job seeking will be less. eventually, I hope that you get your best decision...
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Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in which you have chosen. With Love, Shima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, honestly, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46753246753 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29646233319 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0720304193 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5454545455 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320662370931 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111204501679 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950579138124 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229702974881 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579982385719 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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