You recently spent a vacation at the home of some friends who live in a different city. Write a letter to your friends.
In your letter
• thank your friends for letting you stay with them
• describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation
• invite your friends to visit you
Dear Sudhir and Rahul,
Thank you very much both of you for giving me shade at your home during my last trip to Banglore. I know it is tough to manage things at home whenever a guest arrives. But, I am thankful to both of you that you guys had compromised for me to living in a single room and providing me a separate room with private toilet.
It was really fun to stay with you guys, especially when we were playing cards at night before going to sleep. I remember Rahul won the game but still it was a great fight between us. Travelling around the city center was an amazing part of my entire trip because it was my first trip to Banglore city. Also, surfing around the city lake at night, where we spent a few hours while talking about different personal experiences, was really unforgettable experience.
I would like to invite you both to New Delhi, as few holidays are coming next month. You guys are welcome to stay with me at my place. There are many beautiful places and historical monuments around my city, which could be visited during your tour to New Delhi. Moreover, I will take you both to India Gate, which is very popular for walking at night.
I am looking forward to hearing from you guys as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Sunil Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4635193133 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29410282493 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3056842229 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248089203764 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837020287833 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622762583366 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115883402257 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905519131318 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.