You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Explain why you took the job
Describe the problem you experienced
suggest what could be done about them.
I am writing this letter in order to divert your attention towards few issues which I am facing in Aman Private Limited.
I joined the organization last week as a computer operator in order to earn money for tuition fee. Also, this is the only reason I opted for part-time because in morning I go for my classes. Although work-life balance is very much satisfactory, expert guidance and trainings for new staff is my point of my concern.
Let me explain, when I caught in major client issues, I do not receive support from experienced persons to assist me in that and most of the time it end up missing imperative project deadlines. Secondly, I feel uncomfortable in operating new laptop devices because of the lack of training during my initial period.
I would like to suggest that assign a one senior person for few weeks to guide me in critical problems so that I can broaden my horizon towards different client issues. It will save the cost for training as expert mind will give us on the job training.
I hope you will appreciate my recommendation. I am looking forward to receiving positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ends'?
Suggestion: ends
...sist me in that and most of the time it end up missing imperative project deadlines...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imperative project deadlines. Secondly, I feel uncomfortable in operating new la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80808080808 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77487451585 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0368389096 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5454545455 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112693613466 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390864266299 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386032520706 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570737663539 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031459123591 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.