You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the bus service I had yesterday.
I am a human right activist and yesterday when my car broke down, I had no other option but to take a bus. It was a really terrible experience.
Firstly, when I got into the bus and looking for a seat the bus driver started driving the bus without ensuring that the passengers have seated. I got little injured because of the sudden hit. Furthermore, when I complained about the incident, the bus driver behaved rudely and said that this was not his responsibility to look for such things. Secondly, he was driving rashly. I was afraid of any accident that could happen because of his rash driving. Even on the speed breakers, he was not slowing down, which causes continious discomfort, as my head bumped twice.
I would like you to enquire this issue with your driver. Also, I want him to be kind with passengers travelling on the bus. I hope that next time I find it satisfactory.
Yours faithfully,
Will smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the bus driver behaved rudely and said that this was not his responsibility to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68681318681 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74003998219 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5071401406 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272974869063 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788118285237 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587550512145 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145991568131 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423857060014 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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