You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you.
Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter
• explain where the place was and how you got there
• describe what you saw
• offer to take your friend there
Dear Amber,
Hope you are doing fine and enjoying to season. I have just returned from my holidays in Finland and while we were catching the amazing lights in Inari. I took a bus from Rovaniemi to Inari. As you know the auroras is something we cannot ask for, because it wasn’t really very visible to the naked eye, although people with adequate cameras could see it.
The hotel I stayed in is right by the lake which calls Juutuanvuono, and I heard that it is a good place to watch the aurora. when I arrived, it was just in the evening. Although the KP index little bit low, thank you for the clear sky so that I can see a little aurora in it. Moreover, nothing is more exciting than I can see the auroras dancing the next day.
The aurora follows the lines of magnetic force, so it makes the aurora look like it is dancing. In the beginning, the aurora was in the shape of a green ribbon, and change to purple in the middle and it is more beautiful than other forms.
I am very glad that I was the one to be blessed by the goddess of fortune. I strongly recommend you catch an aurora in Inari.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoying seasoning'.
Suggestion: enjoying seasoning
...r Amber, Hope you are doing fine and enjoying to season. I have just returned from my holidays ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...it is a good place to watch the aurora. when I arrived, it was just in the evening. ...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...t in the evening. Although the KP index little bit low, thank you for the clear sky so tha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29166666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2193992486 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9662871931 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118184500891 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409750880275 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465533145868 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074271910691 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385392603884 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.