You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to singer.
say how you feel about his/her performance
give details of your music-related activities
explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr Green,
I am writing this letter in connection to your performance at silver Bay hall on November 5th. I attended the concert and enjoyed it as much as anyone did. I saw how you performed and I feel that you did a splendid job. I am quite impressed with your performance.
I am a lyricist myself. It has been a year since I started the career as a lyricist and two of the songs I wrote topped the local music chart. I made them for James Blunt. At the moment I am looking for an artist to help me out with my career.
I would appreciate it if you could use a few songs which I wrote for you. I am sure that you will make it hit with your level of talent. I too am looking for better prospects at my career so I would get more career opportunities.
please find the attached lyrics of a few songs which I wrote for you. I am looking forward to your response regarding my offer.
Yours sincerely,
Noel Peters
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t and enjoyed it as much as anyone did. I saw how you performed and I feel that y...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and I feel that you did a splendid job. I am quite impressed with your performanc...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... impressed with your performance. I am a lyricist myself. It has been a yea...
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Line 11, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... make it hit with your level of talent. I too am looking for better prospects at ...
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Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...it hit with your level of talent. I too am looking for better prospects at my care...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...uld get more career opportunities. please find the attached lyrics of a few songs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20555555556 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45791741617 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6545748513 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.0714285714 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19985056872 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723587285373 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104273893614 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128057019515 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818921669455 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.25 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.