You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.
say how you feel about his/her performance
give details of your music-related activities
explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear sir
I am one of the crowd who came to listen to your band in Delhi this weekend, and is pending down this missive in connection with my experience and why you were my favourite amongst all the other musicians.
Since childhood I always wanted to enjoy your group performing live and I became even bigger fan now and specially the way you sing and play guitar as it was like a treat for my eyes and ears. Your voice has a magic, which is capable of insisting any individual to dance. On the top of that, you are an epitome of a true performer.
Furthermore, I wanted to tell you that I am not only a singer, who is learning in Alex music school for the past six years now, but also can play guitar pretty well. Additionally, I have won various awards for the same.
Ereyesterday, I read an article that you are looking for some budding artists to whom you yourself will train. It will mean the world to me, if you can consider me. Videos of my performances are up on my YouTube channel 'Ruby's world' by which you can evaluate my skills.
I look forward for a positive response.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
Arshdeep Kaur
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| 2020-11-19 | Arshdeepmondair | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45971563981 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48500365064 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8198397118 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26187448897 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098524109165 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633212515527 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115124428515 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679757402428 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.