You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. you want to yell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
Say how you feel about his performance
Give detail of your musical activities
Explain how you would like him to help with your musical activities.
Dear Ricky,
I am extremely thankful for your band for giving a wonderful performance in South Delhi last weekend. I am a huge fan of your chorus 'Moonlight' and particularly your melodious voice. I am writing to share my pleasure as I was amazed to see your outstanding performance and I must say your genre resembles our nation's legendary musicians.
I am a trainee at the institute of art and music and have a desire to built my career in this field. I have an experience of singing pop as well as classical songs in local ceremonies. Besides this, if I would have given choice, my preference is to be a drummer.
I always wish to be a part of your band and accentuate my talent with the help of such a reputed platform. I request you to consider my profile and provide such an incredible opportunity for me.
Hopefully, you will pay attention to my skills.
Waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely
Kritika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ricky, I am extremely thankful for your band fo...
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Line 11, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and particularly your melodious voice. I am writing to share my pleasure as I wa...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s our nations legendary musicians. I am a trainee at the institute of art an...
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Line 15, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esire to built my career in this field. I have an experience of singing pop as we...
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Line 15, column 205, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had given'?
Suggestion: had given
...in local ceremonies. Besides this, if I would have given choice, my preference is to be a drumme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88957055215 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93883601498 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2145888038 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138922965398 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057168230926 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385085362032 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792799945797 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370394787996 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.