Dear Jane,
How are you doing? I have an exciting news to share. Last week, I visited Brazil for a small business trip, and happened to witness the spectacular Carnival there. The vibrant colors and highlights reminded me of you.
The Annual Carnival, surprisingly takes place during the month of November of every year as the locals mark the success of a wonderful harvest season. There are parades of a variety of farming groups during the day, and at night, the very same street turns into a party place. As long as I was there, I’ve enjoyed it to the fullest. I feel that you must join me as I am making a second trip there this month.
I’ve known you enough to know that, drinks and fancy snacks have always interested you, which you will get in ample during this carnival. Every evening after the parade, the farmers and locals host a dance party which the both of us have loved right from college days. Furthermore, I feel it will be the perfect get away from your tedious work schedule.
I would be more than happy if you join me during this second trip, as I’ve already booked a ticket for you. It’ll be a matter of few days, just the two of us, and I promise you are never going to forget it. Don’t worry too much about packing as I’ve taken care of that too. Just come to the airport at 9am in the morning this coming Saturday and leave the rest to me.
See you soon,
Adlen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
Dear Jane, How are you doing? I have an exciting news to share. Last week, I visited Brazil f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38697318008 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12267452202 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9901830593 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5625 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143112512433 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047186547895 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417745251401 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799341203742 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234788133968 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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