You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter
tell your friend what the event was
explain why you think your friend would like the event
invite them to come to the event with you
Dear John,
How are you doing? I hope you and your family enjoying your life in Paris. Well, I am going to share my experience with you about the science exhibition that was held at Lambton College. A plethora of static, as well as working models, were displayed in that event.
Do you remember those days at school when we participated in the science fair? Because of the working of water pollution treatment plant model you got the first rank. We both were on nine cloud at that time. After that event, we enjoyed a lot with our friends. I know you have a keen interest in such science fairs from your childhood age.
This exhibition was held by the college president and still have an opportunity to participate for working models. I would like to take participate as a group member. What do you think? It's time to show our skills in the science field and of course, a chance to meet each other. I'm excited to join your company for this event.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Warm wishes,
Anu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en we participated in the science fair? Because of the working of water pollution treat...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...of course, a chance to meet each other. Im excited to join your company for this e...
^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...join your company for this event. I cant wait to hear from you. Warm wishes, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, still, well, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52717391304 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32846663119 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.912829083 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.0625 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29161954432 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928473783412 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758516011099 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173403444509 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665268704238 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.81 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.